Tuesday, December 2, 2008

In Dark Waters

Take some time, don't think too hard, but feel every line and come to a conclusion of what this collection of verses is trying to portray

In Dark Waters

In this dark path,
In this wet bath,
My instinct is to swim forward.
Millions like me,
In a rapid flurry,
The little prey ahead we move toward.

To my prey I am linked,
As I react to instinct,
And swim ahead with uttermost determination.
Many around die,
After they have desperately tried,
To find the prey we all seek, our final destination.

Now slowly I crawl,
Hindered by adhesive walls,
As I reach the big hollow, that nurtures the fruit.
I carefully enter,
And swim towards the center,
Exploring private territories like an ill-mannered brute.

Looking up from the middle,
I try solving the riddle,
Of where located is the treasure that I seek.
Blindly I swim up,
The walls of this cup,
So wet, so hindering, causing me weak.

My senses begin to work,
Somewhere close does my prey lurk,
In a determined effort I give all in me and move ahead.
With utmost care I move,
As this is severely behoove,
If recklessly proceed do I, the sticky walls, me, would behead!

Dark it is in here,
But my task is clear,
Faster I move, closer towards this journey’s end.
Others beside moving quick,
Few absorbed by the walls, few sick,
But I move now with extreme vigor, all my energy I am made to spend!

Hindering liquid in my way,
My body is battered and frayed,
Victory in this race is what I desperately seek.
Fighting hard in pain,
Against the liquid my bane,
I journey forth in my last effort, though survival looks bleak!

Finally I see the prey,
Ahead in my path she lays,
I pounce onto her walls and begin a new venture.
Into the walls of my mate,
I slowly penetrate,
I enter inside, victorious and happy, preparing for the next adventure!

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